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Jupiter

We are learning to write an information report about a topic related to space.

By Friday 5 June you need to have written and edited your information report on a topic related to space so that it is ready to be published.

Here are some ideas to write

• Jupiter
• Astronauts
• Earth    
• The Moon
• Eclipses
• Stars

My topic is:

Jupiter

You need to attend one workshop with the teacher on an area that you feel you need help with for your writing. Here is the timetable where you will make your bookings. There is space for seven people in each workshop so book in quickly to make sure there is space!

Start researching and plan your writing here: (remember to write notes in your plan). Click here to see an exemplar of a plan.

Introduction: Hello have you had heard about jupiter
Main idea: introduction	More detail: hi	More detail: hello
Main idea: size size	More details: 143,000	More detail: 778
Main idea: information	More detail: does not have rings	More detail: jupiter  storm

Success Criteria for writing. Click here to see an exemplar of an information report about Mars.

Level 3	Student Targets:	Yes!
Audience and Purpose	Identify my audience and purpose for writing.	yes
Content/Ideas	Write clearly and include all important information.	yes
	Add factual detail to expand my ideas.	yes
Structure: including punctuation and grammar	Use different sentence starters.
	Join some ideas using conjunctions such as: when, while, after, since, until, if, because, although, that	yes
	Organise my ideas into paragraphs and sequence my ideas so that my writing flows.	yes
	Use subheadings for each new paragraph to tell the reader what it is about	yes
	Check that I am writing in the present tense (for example: the sun is a ball of fire; the stars are shooting through the sky)
	Use a range of punctuation correctly.    (.,?!)	yes
Editing	Identify and correct most spelling errors.	yes
	Improve my writing so that it is more enjoyable/informative for the reader.	yes

Start your writing here:

          

               Jupiter

Introduction

Do you know anything about the planet that is call Jupiter? Do you know that Saturn and Jupiter is the same?But Jupiter does have ring ,but they are invisible.

Size

Do you know that Jupiter is the second bigger planet?Do you know that Jupiter is bigger than the earth and it is bigger than the all the planets.But it is not bigger that the sun,it is only bigger that the other planets,but not the sun.

Information

Do you know that Jupiter has 63 moons?but also did you know there wasn't actually 63 moons it was 67 moons because 4  more moons was was made out of dust. ”it is so much”Earth has 1 moon but Jupiter has 67! it is so cool. right?

Satrun

Take a photo of your plan using an ipad and insert it here.

Success Criteria

Clear categories with subtitles	Self	LB
Use questions to hook the reader in the introduction	✔	✔
Use sentences and paragraphs	✔	✔
Use facts to inform the reader	✔	✔
Use different sentence starters	✔	✔
Use VCOP	✔	✔

Start writing here…

                                               saturn

Introduction

Have every wonder what is the plant with the rings?

Do you know anything about the plant with the rings,it is call saturn and it has rings around it.

appearance

Saturn is drifter then every other plants because it is the only and the one plant, that has ice in that plant it is so so cold over there and, firing over there.If you go over there then you,will get very sick and you will get very cold. Saturn is giant and huge.Saturn has rock over there on the saturn.and saturn is so big and huge,and saturn has lots of rings.

size

Saturn is 1,427 million km away from the sun.Saturn is 120,500 km big then the earth and saturn and Jupiter is like the has saturn the Jupiter is 778 million km away from the sun and saturn is 1,427 away from the sun there are kaede same that why the jupiter and saturn.

Life on saturn

If you go on top of saturn then you we get very very sick because on saturn there is so much, ice over there.It is so sown over there that even if you go to the sun,sitll you want get matter.And do you know there is rockey as well and if you go there then you will be very bipey and yes you will get hart.

                  THIS IS MY WRITING

                      

                                         

Space junk

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My name in new zeanland sigin language

This week we have been learning some sign language in flox class.This is the link to my name in NZSL.

can you sign your name?

ineresting facts

Hi i am Vaidika and this is an audio recording about me!




https://drive.google.com/open?id=0B-5yDJ7UAiU8Y21mUDd4bWhWUFE&authuser=0

I am looking ford to use my voice roistered.

Anzac letter