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Home learning Challenge

This is my home learning challenge.I learned how to blued the house with paper and it was little bit hard but I fennel did it and it was fun making the house and i had a helped from my big sister.

space inquiry

BYE BYE

Hi do you know that one stunts teacher form our class is goes to other school.and that the hole class made a card and we made it in so if you want to look at it then here is the like. 

sky watch

DO you know any thing about sky watch and if you do not then here is the like to the information.

mataiki

mataiki is a seven sister and If you want to find more about that then here is the link to the work.

sky watch DLO

Do you know any thing about sky watch if you want to fide out then here is the link to the work.
I hope you like the work.keep watching.

Jupiter

We are learning to write an information report about a topic related to space.

By Friday 5 June you need to have written and edited your information report on a topic related to space so that it is ready to be published.

Here are some ideas to write

• Jupiter
• Astronauts
• Earth    
• The Moon
• Eclipses
• Stars

My topic is:

Jupiter

You need to attend one workshop with the teacher on an area that you feel you need help with for your writing. Here is the timetable where you will make your bookings. There is space for seven people in each workshop so book in quickly to make sure there is space!

Start researching and plan your writing here: (remember to write notes in your plan). Click here to see an exemplar of a plan.

Introduction: Hello have you had heard about jupiter
Main idea: introduction	More detail: hi	More detail: hello
Main idea: size size	More details: 143,000	More detail: 778
Main idea: information	More detail: does not have rings	More detail: jupiter  storm

Success Criteria for writing. Click here to see an exemplar of an information report about Mars.

Level 3	Student Targets:	Yes!
Audience and Purpose	Identify my audience and purpose for writing.	yes
Content/Ideas	Write clearly and include all important information.	yes
	Add factual detail to expand my ideas.	yes
Structure: including punctuation and grammar	Use different sentence starters.
	Join some ideas using conjunctions such as: when, while, after, since, until, if, because, although, that	yes
	Organise my ideas into paragraphs and sequence my ideas so that my writing flows.	yes
	Use subheadings for each new paragraph to tell the reader what it is about	yes
	Check that I am writing in the present tense (for example: the sun is a ball of fire; the stars are shooting through the sky)
	Use a range of punctuation correctly.    (.,?!)	yes
Editing	Identify and correct most spelling errors.	yes
	Improve my writing so that it is more enjoyable/informative for the reader.	yes

Start your writing here:

          

               Jupiter

Introduction

Do you know anything about the planet that is call Jupiter? Do you know that Saturn and Jupiter is the same?But Jupiter does have ring ,but they are invisible.

Size

Do you know that Jupiter is the second bigger planet?Do you know that Jupiter is bigger than the earth and it is bigger than the all the planets.But it is not bigger that the sun,it is only bigger that the other planets,but not the sun.

Information

Do you know that Jupiter has 63 moons?but also did you know there wasn't actually 63 moons it was 67 moons because 4  more moons was was made out of dust. ”it is so much”Earth has 1 moon but Jupiter has 67! it is so cool. right?