We are learning to write an information report about a topic related to space.
By Friday 5 June you need to have written and edited your information report on a topic related to space so that it is ready to be published.
Here are some ideas to write
- Jupiter
- Astronauts
- Earth
- The Moon
- Eclipses
- Stars
My topic is:
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Jupiter
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You need to attend one workshop with the teacher on an area that you feel you need help with for your writing. Here is the timetable where you will make your bookings. There is space for seven people in each workshop so book in quickly to make sure there is space!
Start researching and plan your writing here: (remember to write notes in your plan). Click here to see an exemplar of a plan.
Introduction:
Hello have you had heard about jupiter
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Main idea:
introduction
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More detail:
hi
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More detail:
hello
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Main idea:
size
size
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More details:
143,000
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More detail:
778
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Main idea:
information
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More detail:
does not have rings
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More detail:
jupiter storm
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Level 3
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Student Targets:
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Yes!
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Audience and Purpose
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yes
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Content/Ideas
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yes
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yes
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Structure: including punctuation and grammar
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yes
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yes
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yes
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yes
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Editing
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yes
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yes
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Start your writing here:
Jupiter
Introduction
Do you know anything about the planet that is call Jupiter? Do you know that Saturn and Jupiter is the same?But Jupiter does have ring ,but they are invisible.
Size
Do you know that Jupiter is the second bigger planet?Do you know that Jupiter is bigger than the earth and it is bigger than the all the planets.But it is not bigger that the sun,it is only bigger that the other planets,but not the sun.
Information
Do you know that Jupiter has 63 moons?but also did you know there wasn't actually 63 moons it was 67 moons because 4 more moons was was made out of dust. ”it is so much”Earth has 1 moon but Jupiter has 67! it is so cool. right?
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