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Wednesday, 15 June 2016

super sentences

Hi world

In Scott class we have been doing some writing and we have been doing super senescent.
So here s the writing under this.




WALT write super sentences.


There are 7 different ways to write super sentences!
  1. Add in words .
  2. Drop in chunks of information .
  3. Add on at the end
  4. Add on at the beginning .
  5. Change words .
  6. Add a simile .
  7. Alliterate


In pairs change this sentence in the seven different ways, stick to one way for each new sentence.


The boy ran down to the river.


  1. I fast boy ran down to the wavy river.
  2. The boy was covered in soap so he ran down the river to clear up.
  3. The boy ran down to the wavy river to catch some fish for lunch.
  4. Running form from his home his ran to the the river.
  5. The boy sprinted down to river.
  6. The boy ran as fast as something like a cheetah.
  7. The boy blindly jumped  and bounced down the river.

The child walked to school.


Jumped of the bus and The kid got his bag and ran as fast as a cheetah, to the school because he was late for school.



Hope you have ad good!!!

     

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