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Monday 25 May 2015

Satrun

Take a photo of your plan using an ipad and insert it here.


Success Criteria
Clear categories with subtitles
Self
LB
Use questions to hook the reader in the introduction
Use sentences and paragraphs
Use facts to inform the reader
Use different sentence starters
Use VCOP


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                                               saturn
Introduction
Have every wonder what is the plant with the rings?
Do you know anything about the plant with the rings,it is call saturn and it has rings around it.

appearance
Saturn is drifter then every other plants because it is the only and the one plant, that has ice in that plant it is so so cold over there and, firing over there.If you go over there then you,will get very sick and you will get very cold. Saturn is giant and huge.Saturn has rock over there on the saturn.and saturn is so big and huge,and saturn has lots of rings.

size
Saturn is 1,427 million km away from the sun.Saturn is 120,500 km big then the earth and saturn and Jupiter is like the has saturn the Jupiter is 778 million km away from the sun and saturn is 1,427 away from the sun there are kaede same that why the jupiter and saturn.

Life on saturn
If you go on top of saturn then you we get very very sick because on saturn there is so much, ice over there.It is so sown over there that even if you go to the sun,sitll you want get matter.And do you know there is rockey as well and if you go there then you will be very bipey and yes you will get hart.


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1 comment:

  1. Hi Vaidika,
    I really like your writing I like the way that you used specific words and the way that you used paragraphs.
    Shreya

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